By looking at our first draft we already had a rough idea of what desperately needed improving, but it is important to get other peoples opinions to make sure we hadn't missed anything, and to back up what we already thought was wrong.
We got more positive points than we expected as I think many people were impressed by the cloning edit that made 2 of the same character appear on the screen. But there were some improvement that were highlighted for example: including music, cutting out wobbles, sorting out the sound issues. originally we were not planning on using music because we did some research on the movie 'The Double' and noticed that this film didn't include any music at all which made all the comedic moments stand out. But after receiving the feedback it was evident that we needed to include music as most of the feedback said it would be a good idea to do so.
Below are some pictures of the feedback we received:
The cloning effect seemed to be popular with the feedback as we got some comments such as 'Cloning is flawless' and 'Good use of cloning' which was nice to hear because that took a lot of time to get right. They believe the acting by Max was convincing. Most of our criticism was lack of music and shaky shots which made sense but overall we thought the feedback was very positive and useful for us.
After the feedback we decided the main things we needed to improve on were:
- Title order, size and font
- Cut out wobbly shots
- Find different sound effects/music and cut out bird sound.
- Remove the title at the end of the sequence.
- Make it more interesting by removing some of the walking shots.