Parellel Final Draft

This is our final draft of our film opening Parallel. We have made quite a few adjustments from our first draft. We have improved the titles greatly, giving them animations, movement and changing the names to make them more interesting to look at. We have added a backing track to make the opening and the walking scene less boring, whilst trying to add some dramatic effect, making the opening scene more engaging. We have cut out a lot of clips in the walking section so it doesn't drag on like it did in the first draft. We have sorted out the sound issues that we encountered on our first draft by increasing the audio gain on the dialogue.